I've been tightening up my review riposte, which I admit I fired off in a bit of a fury. Please reread it if you found it confusing intially. It probably makes a little more sense, especially paragraphs 2 and 3. Now that I've had time to think, this has been a great opportunity to get some things down.

And the review raises a few honest and general questions. For instance: What would be wrong with doodling anyway?